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SEASON 3 — EPISODE 3
“UNFOLLOWED”
Created, Written & Trademarked by:
Antoinette L. Johnson™
Queenflix/Realitydundiditagain/RCCOIN
Realitydundiditagainwordpresscom
Genre: Psychological Thriller / Social Horror
Tone: Intimate. Paranoid. Emotionally Raw.
Theme: Betrayal spreads faster than hate.
⚫ COLD OPEN — BEST FRIENDS
Two teenage girls.
LENA and KAYLA.
Best friends since elementary school.
Matching bracelets. Shared passwords. Inside jokes.
They film a joint livestream:
“Besties forever. Nobody can break this.”
Hearts flood the screen.
Comments:
“Goals.”
“Real friendship.”
Aria watches from her room.
Something feels… off.
🩸 THE SEED
The next day at school—
Someone starts a rumor in the comments under Lena’s photo.
“Kayla said she’s tired of carrying you.”
Fake account.
No profile pic.
But it gets likes.
Kayla denies it.
Lena says she believes her.
But that seed?
Planted.
👁️ DIGITAL PARANOIA
More anonymous comments appear.
Screenshots that look real.
Edited voice notes.
“Proof.”
Each one slightly believable.
Not dramatic.
Not extreme.
Just enough to create doubt.
Lena starts checking Kayla’s following list.
Kayla notices Lena liking different posts.
Micro-behaviors.
Micro-betrayals.
The entity doesn’t need rage now.
It feeds on insecurity.
🔥 GROUP CHAT HORROR
The girls’ private group chat starts glitching.
Messages appear that neither of them typed.
“She talks about you.”
“She thinks you’re jealous.”
“She said you’re replaceable.”
They both swear they didn’t send them.
But the chat shows “seen.”
Receipts don’t lie.
Right?
Aria overhears Lena crying on the phone.
“Why would you say that?”
Kayla crying too.
“I didn’t.”
Across town—
The shadow grows.
Stronger.
Messier.
It flickers in reflections.
Store windows.
Phone screens.
It doesn’t roar.
It whispers.
🪓 THE BREAK
Lunchroom confrontation.
Public.
Raw.
LENA: “Just admit it!”
KAYLA: “You already decided I did!”
Phones record.
Clips hit social media.
Now it’s content.
The argument trends locally.
People choose sides.
Strangers comment:
“Drop her.”
“She was never your friend.”
“Real ones move in silence.”
The entity FEEDS.
💀 ARIA INTERVENES
That night—
Aria knocks on Lena’s door.
ARIA:
“It makes you doubt what you already know.”
Lena wipes tears.
“What?”
ARIA:
“It can’t create lies. It only stretches cracks.”
Silence.
Lena thinks.
Kayla texts her:
“Can we talk without phones?”
Old-school.
Face to face.
No screenshots.
No proof.
Just eye contact.
⚫ FINAL SCENE — STARVING IT
The girls meet at a park.
No devices.
No recording.
No livestream.
Just conversation.
Messy. Emotional. Honest.
They admit insecurity.
Jealousy.
Misunderstandings.
They choose each other anyway.
Across the city—
The entity flickers.
Smaller.
But not gone.
Because not everyone chooses honesty.
Back in her room—
Aria stares at her reflection.
This time—
It flickers differently.
Stronger.
Like the entity is learning from resistance too.
ARIA (softly):
“You evolve. So will we.”
CUT TO BLACK.


























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