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SEASON 3 — EPISODE 2
“INSIDE THE HOUSE”
Created, Written & Trademarked by:
Antoinette L. Johnson™
Queenflix/Realitydundiditagain/RCCOIN

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Genre: Psychological Thriller / Realistic Horror
Tone: Intimate. Suffocating. Disturbingly Real.
Theme: The monster doesn’t need Wi-Fi anymore.

⚫ COLD OPEN — FAMILY DINNER
Normal house.
Normal family.
Mom scrolling at the table.
Dad half-watching TV.
Teen son, Marcus, filming a “storytime rant.”
Aria sits quietly eating.
Marcus laughs into his phone:
“Y’all ever notice how fake people are? Like I swear some of y’all don’t deserve oxygen.”
His post uploads.
It blows up.
Notifications explode.
Likes. Shares. Comments.
His eyes light up.
Validation.
Across the table, Aria freezes.
Her fork stops mid-air.
She feels it.

🩸 THE SHIFT
That night—
Marcus can’t sleep.
His phone keeps lighting up.
But no sound.
Just screen flashes.
He opens the comments.
They’re different now.
Not arguing.
Not reacting.
They’re echoing him.
“They don’t deserve oxygen.”
“They don’t deserve oxygen.”
“They don’t deserve oxygen.”
Hundreds of times.
Copy and paste.
His own words.
His breathing gets shallow.
He tries to delete the post.
Error.

👁️ PERSONAL
Aria stands in his doorway.
Watching.
ARIA (quiet):
“You fed it.”
Marcus snaps.
“Fed what? It’s just comments!”
The lights flicker.
Not dramatically.
Subtly.
Like a bad bulb.
But it keeps happening.

🔥 REALISTIC HORROR
Over the next 24 hours—
Marcus’ personality shifts.
He becomes colder.
Short-tempered.
Suspicious.
He starts recording more.
Rants get darker.
He says things he doesn’t fully mean—
But the engagement spikes every time.
And each time?
His pupils dilate slightly longer than normal.
Aria notices.
She doesn’t tell her parents.
They wouldn’t believe her.
They already think she imagines things.

🪓 THE MIRROR SCENE
Marcus is live-streaming again.
Angrier than usual.
“Some of y’all are worthless. Like actually worthless.”
Comments pour in.
Agreeing.
Fueling.
He goes to the bathroom after.
Washes his face.
Looks in the mirror.
For half a second—
His reflection doesn’t move when he does.
It smiles first.
Then catches up.
He stumbles back.
Breathing heavy.
Whispers:
“I didn’t mean it…”
From the mirror—
Softly:
“But you liked it.”

💀 THE REVEAL
Aria finally confronts him.
ARIA:
“It doesn’t possess people. It amplifies them.”
Marcus shakes.
“Make it stop.”
She steps closer.
“You have to.”
He doesn’t understand.
Until his phone lights up again.
A new notification.
TRENDING #WorthlessOxygen
His own words turned into a global insult challenge.
Kids repeating it at school.
Adults using it online.
It’s spreading offline.
Real world consequences.
A kid at school repeats it to another student.
That student cries.
Something small breaks.
The entity feeds.

⚫ FINAL SCENE — CHOICE
Marcus deletes all his accounts.
Smashes his phone.
Refuses to engage.
For days—
Nothing happens.
Withdrawal hits.
He feels invisible.
Unseen.
Unimportant.
And that hurts more than the fear did.
Aria watches him sit quietly in his room.
No notifications.
No noise.
Just him.
The air feels lighter.
But not safe.
Across town—
Another rant is going viral.
The entity doesn’t need one host.
It just needs attention.
Aria closes her bedroom door.
For the first time—
She looks tired.
Because this fight?
Is personal now.
CUT TO BLACK.