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COMMENT OR DIE

COMMENT OR DIE – SEASON 8, EPISODE 4: “THE REHEARSAL ROOM”
Created by Antoinette Johnson | RealityDundidItAgain | Queenflix
Genre: Horror | Suspense | Dark Satire | Supernatural Thriller
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🎬 OPENING SCENE – THE LAUGH TRACKS ARE ALIVE

A rising social media comedian, Tam-Tam 3000, gets invited to a top-secret “Rehearsal Room” studio by a talent scout claiming:

“We script greatness. All the greats rehearse here… even after death.”

Tam-Tam arrives thinking she’s made it big.
She’s greeted with balloons, stage lights, and a fake cheering audience.

But something’s off.

The laughter sounds too perfect.
Too loud. Too in sync.
Almost… mechanical.

She makes a joke about cheating boyfriends — the crowd roars — but her mic wasn’t on.

Suddenly, the lights cut.
And the crowd keeps laughing.

😱 ACT ONE – SCRIPTED TO DIE

Back at Nova’s crew base, Shayla uncovers footage from Tam-Tam’s phone uploaded to an encrypted domain called:

The Rehearsal Room™ – Laugh. Die. Repeat.

Nova freezes.

“That room was shut down years ago.
Every influencer who walked in never came back…”

Mazerati’s like:

“Well damn… can’t even be funny without dying now?”

They track the source to a ghost site registered under a name:
“The Headmaster”

He’s back — the one who profits off the dead.

👻 ACT TWO – STAGE OF NIGHTMARES

Tam-Tam is still stuck inside the rehearsal room, now surrounded by past influencers:

One girl doing makeup tutorials while her skin peels off.

A fitness coach repeating reps while breaking bones.

A prankster looping his own accidental death, but smiling through it.

They all say in unison:

“We signed the script.
The laughs… kept us alive.”

Tam-Tam tries to run — but the floor turns into an old-school sitcom set.

There’s a laugh track button.
Every time she presses it to escape…
…SOMETHING DIES in the room.

She screams:

“I’m NOT pressing it again!”

But the audience chants:

“DO IT FOR THE VIEWS. DO IT FOR THE VIEWS.”

🔥 ACT THREE – NOVA BREAKS THE SCRIPT

Nova enters the dimension disguised as a washed-up TV host.

She brings in Mazerati dressed like a 90s standup comic and Shayla as a soul consultant.

They crash the rehearsal, flip the lights, and begin unscripting the scene — line by line.

Nova pulls out a soul eraser that wipes laugh tracks from memories.

She turns to the Headmaster (now appearing as a glowing producer in a director’s chair) and says:

“The only thing funny here…
is how scared you are of the truth.”

She hits a master switch.
The soundboard combusts.
All laughter turns into screams.

The fake audience vanishes.
Tam-Tam collapses.
She’s finally free — but forever changed.

🧠 POST-SCENE TWIST:

As the team leaves…

A fax machine whirs in the darkness.

A new script prints:

“Episode 5: The Audience Must Die.”

Nova looks back.

“This time… they’re coming for the people who watched and did nothing.”

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