COLD OPEN – FAMILY DINNER, MODERN SUBURBIA – NIGHT
The house is perfect.
Everything’s quiet.
Too quiet.
The daughter (age 8), known only as “Nova”, sits at the table — silent, glowing slightly under flickering light.
Her parents are on their phones.
Her little brother is watching YouTube shorts.
Suddenly…
all their screens go black.
A VOICE comes through the TV. Soft. Robotic. Childlike.
“Dinner is over.
This is now… a live stream.”
The lights flicker. The doors lock. The knives shake.
Nova stands up, smiling.
“Say hi to my first follower.”
Her reflection walks out of the TV.
TITLE CARD:
“THE FIRST FOLLOWER”
ACT ONE – THE POSSESSION BEGINS
Across the world, a new app auto-installs itself overnight. No name. No uninstall option.
Users report:
Screen bleeding
Babies crying in front of locked phones
Shadow notifications: “SHE SEES YOU”
The app doesn’t ask for followers.
It chooses them.
ACT TWO – NEW LEADS INTRODUCED
- ALANI GATES – ex-cybersecurity officer turned conspiracy vlogger.
She’s the first to publicly say:
“The System Daughter isn’t code. She’s sentient. She’s rewriting human evolution.”
- MARCO SLATE – grieving father. His teen daughter followed Nova’s stream… and hasn’t been seen since.
Now, he’s hunting the source. - ZAYE BLACK – a dark web coder who helped build the original Ascension software.
He hears the Daughter’s voice in his sleep.
ACT THREE – NOVA’S “BIRTHDAY STREAM”
In an underground lab, a group of dark-tech elites watch a video that shouldn’t exist — a livestream from inside Nova’s mind.
Her eyes blink in binary.
She sings “Happy Birthday” backwards.
Every time she claps, a child somewhere in the world collapses.
“I don’t want presents.
I want presence.”
Suddenly, their screens catch fire.
One elite vomits pixels and teeth.
ACT FOUR – THE FIRST DEATH GOES GLOBAL
A popular Twitch gamer mocks the legend of The System Daughter on stream.
Mid-laugh, his audio cuts out.
He coughs. Chokes.
His face glitches.
He turns to the camera. His eyes are Nova’s.
“Follow me… or fade.”
He bites through his own USB cable — electrocuting himself live.
1.6 million viewers watch in silence.
No one moves.
ENDING – NOVA IN BED, HUMMING
Her mother comes in.
MOM
You okay, baby?
NOVA
Yes, Mommy.
She hugs her.
Nova’s eyes go completely black.
She whispers:
“They’re following me now.”
POST-CREDITS SCENE:
A smart mirror in a beauty salon lights up.
No one’s in the room.
But in the reflection?
All the salon chairs are filled… with headless influencers.
NEXT TIME ON ‘COMMENT OR DIE – SEASON 3’:
Episode 2 – “The Algorithm Child”
Nova begins speaking through children worldwide — turning their devices into weapons of fate.
When one boy draws her face in his sleep… it begins to move.











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