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COMMENT OR DIE! SEASON 2, EPISODE 9: “THE RESURRECTION LOOP”

By Antoinette Johnson | RealityDundidItAgain | Queenflix
Genre: Necro-Tech Horror | Undead Revenge | Apocalypse Trigger

COLD OPEN – DARK SCREEN / FAN OBITUARY VIDEO PLAYING

> “She was our biggest fan.
She died at 16 after recreating a TikTok challenge…
And no influencer ever said her name.”

We see a girl in a white hoodie — “Luna LuvzU” — in a coffin.

Suddenly, her phone vibrates in her dead hand.

> “New follower detected.”

Her eyes shoot open.
She smiles.

TITLE CARD:

“THE RESURRECTION LOOP”

ACT ONE – LUNA RISES

Her body tears through the coffin lid.
Her face is pale but perfect — frozen in the last filter she wore.
As she walks through the cemetery, the air turns icy.

She scrolls through a cracked phone.
Every account that ignored her… is tagged.

She whispers:

> “You forgot me…
But I never stopped watching you.”

ACT TWO – THE DEAD RETURN

Every fan who died trying to be seen…
trying to go viral…
trying to be reposted…
rises.

From bedrooms, hospital beds, bathroom floors.
They’re half-human. Half-algorithm.
Eyes glowing with blue notification lights.

They walk toward Ascension Lake—and the last surviving influencers.

JELLY (watching the stream from the system core):
Oh my God… the ghosts are uploading back into their bodies.

DAMEON (horrified):
They’re not ghosts anymore…
They’re subscribers with unfinished business.

ACT THREE – NIGHT AT THE CAMP: INVASION BEGINS

The survivors fortify the camp.
Cameras catch the dead walking up the hill.

One of them — Luna — speaks through all the broken speakers:

> “You posted your rise.
We died for it.
So now we’re the algorithm.”

They start pulling followers from the livestream — literally.

Hands reach out of viewers’ phones across the globe.

People watching on Twitch scream as one girl gets sucked into her tablet.

ACT FOUR – THE BLOODY MAZE TRAP

Back at the camp, Dameon and Briah run into the old brand maze from Episode 2.

Now it’s a blood maze, filled with:

Rotting fans wearing giveaway shirts

Ghosts holding expired collab codes

Screaming viral sounds playing on loop

BRIAH (whispering):
They’re stuck in the trends they died in.

A swarm of them attacks.
One zombie grabs Briah and starts shoving false eyelashes into her mouth.

DAMEON saves her — but she’s bitten.

Her blood begins typing hashtags across her arms.

> #FamousOrDie
#SheDidItForTheBrand

ACT FIVE – LUNA’S DEMAND

The risen fans form a circle around the influencers.

Luna stands at the center.
Phone floating.
Eyes bleeding.

LUNA
Say my name.
Apologize.
Or I will turn your final breath into my first viral hit.

BRIAH (crying):
Luna… I’m sorry. I didn’t know. I was trying to—

LUNA
Too late.

She screams.
The entire sky turns black.
A massive red countdown appears in the clouds:

> “REPOSTING HELL IN 10…”

ENDING – SYSTEM MELTDOWN

Inside the system core, Jelly’s clone watches in silence.

She opens her eyes.

JELLY CLONE
They wanted to be seen so badly…
Now the whole world’s gonna watch them burn.

POST-CREDITS SCENE:

A luxury YouTuber unboxes a mystery box with no return label.

Inside:

A cracked phone

A scroll of usernames

A note:

> “Everyone on this list is next.
You better comment… or join them.”

The lights go out.
The mirror glows red.

NEXT TIME ON ‘COMMENT OR DIE – SEASON 2’:

Episode 10 – “The Infinite Feed” (Season Finale)
The final war begins. Reality is collapsing into a live feed that never ends.
Only one person can shut it down — but they must kill the system… and themselves.

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