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COMMENT OR DIE! EPISODE 11: “SYSTEM SHOWDOWN & PROPHETIC FLASHBACK”

By Antoinette Johnson | RealityDundidItAgain | Queenflix
Genre: Tech-Horror | Spiritual War | Apocalyptic Suspense

COLD OPEN – DATA CHAMBER – DEEP DARK WEB

The Headmaster walks through a chamber of floating influencer souls—frozen in data bubbles, whispering in static.

Behind him, a throne of screens flickers with old viral clips, fan comments, cancelled lives.

He reaches the final one:

> “Sabriella Stone – Status: INCOMPLETE”

HEADMASTER
She was never meant to survive.
She was meant… to warn.

He slams his hand down.

The prophecy begins rewriting itself again.

TITLE CARD:

“SYSTEM SHOWDOWN & PROPHETIC FLASHBACK”

ACT ONE – SABRIELLA’S HIDEOUT – PRESENT DAY

Sabriella hears the bells of her childhood church — but she’s not near one. She follows the sound.

Finds an old payphone ringing in a dark alley.

She answers.

VOICE (Feminine, Divine):

> “They erased your past.
So now, you must remember the original code…”

Suddenly, her eyes roll back.
She collapses. Flashback begins.

ACT TWO – PROPHETIC FLASHBACK (5 YEARS AGO)

Sabriella is 19. A rising TikTok motivational queen with a small but loyal following.

One night, a stranger comments:

> “You are the key to the war. I saw it in the mirrors.”

The next day, her account goes wild — millions of views. Her messages flood with brands.

But something’s off.
Her reflection glitches.
Her dreams repeat.
And that stranger’s comment? Keeps reposting itself. Over and over.

She’s contacted by someone anonymous:

“You’ve been chosen by light. But the algorithm chose you for death.”

That night, she’s nearly killed in a freak power surge during a livestream…
And wakes up in the hospital.

But the nurse says:

> “You died for three minutes, baby.
What you see now… that ain’t the world you left.”

ACT THREE – BACK TO PRESENT

Sabriella wakes up in tears.
She remembers everything.

SABRIELLA
I was supposed to stop it before it started.

Her phone glows. She opens her camera.

And her future self is on the screen, bleeding, screaming:

> “He found the backup prophecy!
RUN—BEFORE HE REBOOTS THE WORLD!”

The phone explodes.

ACT FOUR – HEADMASTER INITIATES SYSTEM RESET

In a last act of domination, the Headmaster launches “CODE FINAL: USER ERASE”.

Everyone who ever watched, liked, or commented in the cursed platform’s history will now become infected.

Apps start crashing.
People collapse mid-swipe.
The world’s screens turn black — then show a single countdown:

> “3:00… 2:59…”

The algorithm is rebooting the Earth’s timeline through every user’s digital footprint.

ACT FIVE – SABRIELLA’S RETURN

She hacks into the master grid.

Goes live for the first time in years.

SABRIELLA (bloody, intense):
This isn’t a skit. This isn’t clout.
If you hear this… turn off your phone.
Shut down your screen.
Look someone in the eyes.
Say something real. Before the algorithm deletes your soul.

ENDING – HEADMASTER vs. SABRIELLA FINAL MOMENT

Sabriella walks into the code core — a glowing neural data node — where the Headmaster’s true form waits.

He looks human… but his shadow doesn’t move with him.

HEADMASTER
Free will was always a myth.
People wanted to obey their feeds.

SABRIELLA
Not anymore.

She pulls out the final code — a string of divine truth spoken like a prayer:

> “You do not own time.
You do not own truth.
You do not own ME.”

Light erupts.
His data begins to fracture.

POST-CREDITS SCENE:

A quiet street.

A little girl throws her iPad in the trash.
Looks up at her mom and says:

> “Can we go outside now?”

The sun glitches —
Then resets itself.

A new timeline has begun.

NEXT TIME ON ‘COMMENT OR DIE’ – SEASON FINALE (EP 12):

“DELETE MY SOUL IF YOU DARE”
Sabriella faces the real final threat: a clone of herself built from all her past posts, likes, and filtered lies.
Only one can survive — and it won’t be the one with followers.

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