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unlocking the ordinary

COMMENT OR DIE! EPISODE 3: “#BODYSNATCHED”

By Antoinette Johnson | RealityDundidItAgain | Queenflix
Genre: Horror / Suspense / Dark Satire

COLD OPEN – MAKEUP ROOM – NIGHT

YVONNE GLOWUP is filming a late-night “Get Ready With Me” video in her glam bunker.
She’s shaken. All her influencer friends are dying—but she’s still chasing engagement.

YVONNE
Y’all been asking for my ‘End of the World Glam’ tutorial… so here it is.
(leans closer)
Even the apocalypse deserves a cut crease.

Her comments are turned off. A mistake.

She applies blush—then the brush sticks to her skin like glue.
She blinks. Her eyes go black in the camera reflection for just a second.

TITLE CARD:

“#BODYSNATCHED”

ACT ONE – HEADMASTER’S LAIR

The Headmaster scrolls Yvonne’s live quietly.

HEADMASTER
Her views are holding… but she hasn’t replied to a single fan in 3 years.
Time to let the algorithm eat.

He types:

> “ENGAGE POSSESSION FILTER – CODE: GLAMDEMON3000”

ACT TWO – YVONNE’S LIVESTREAM CONTINUES

She uses a new filter sent to her via a brand collab—“SoulGlow FX: Possessed Edition”.

YVONNE
Okay, y’all, this filter is a slay—look at my eyes!

Suddenly her body jerks. The lights flicker.

She begins applying makeup without looking—fast, robotic. She begins whispering in a voice that is not hers.

DEMONIC VOICE (through Yvonne):
“You watched me cry when she blocked me.
You ignored my comments. Now feel what that feels like…”

She grabs a scalpel meant for eyebrow carving—slicing across her cheeks in a smile shape.

Her blood drips but her body continues applying contour like nothing happened.

ACT THREE – OG SUPPORTER HEADQUARTERS

NIA_STILLHERE watches Yvonne’s stream in real-time.

NIA
What filter was that? I didn’t approve that collab…

OG_COMMENTER
The Headmaster’s doing too much. He’s turning this into a horror movie.

DEE (@ShadowLurker420)
Correction. He’s hijacking our mission.

They realize… they’re not the only ones killing influencers anymore.
Now the algorithm is alive.

ACT FOUR – FLASHBACK: THE ORIGIN OF THE FILTER CURSE

Back in 2021, a fan named Jessie posted a heartfelt comment under Yvonne’s video after being bullied in school for copying her look.

Yvonne never replied.
Jessie later died by suicide—her last online act was reposting Yvonne’s video with the caption:

> “Wish she saw me.”

The Headmaster turned that death into code. That pain is now embedded in the SoulGlow FX filter.

ACT FIVE – YVONNE’S FINAL SCENE

As Yvonne screams for help, her phone begins filming without her touching it.
The filter turns into her real face. Her lips move, but she’s not speaking.

FILTER VOICE:
“Thanks for watching, babes.
Don’t forget to comment… or join me next.”

She begins floating above the vanity. Her phone bursts into flames. Static. Cut to black.

ACT SIX – SUPPORTERS REALIZE THE GAME’S CHANGED

NIA
This ain’t about revenge anymore.

DEE
He’s evolving the code. Using trauma for tech. We’re losing control.

OG_COMMENTER
Then it’s time we shut the system down—before we’re next.

ENDING SCENE – HEADMASTER TURNS TO CAMERA

Breaking the fourth wall.

HEADMASTER (to us)
They thought they created a movement.
But I own the network.
And the next big drop?

You.

Glitch. His face becomes your reflection for a second.

NEXT TIME ON ‘COMMENT OR DIE’:

A dead influencer’s ghost returns through the For You Page to warn a rising star.
But her views are skyrocketing—and she’s too addicted to quit now.

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