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COMMENT OR DIE: EPISODE 2: “UNFOLLOW THE SHADOWS”

By Antoinette Johnson | RealityDundidItAgain | Queenflix

OPENING SCENE – DARK OFFICE, UNKNOWN LOCATION

A massive digital wall displays live influencer streams, comments, likes, deaths, and engagement charts. A man in a sleek black suit sits in a velvet chair, sipping coffee. His name is only known as:

> THE HEADMASTER OF SOCIAL MEDIA

HEADMASTER (to himself)
The weaker their loyalty, the higher the clicks…
Fame dies, but fear? Fear sells.

A screen shows Zeekie and Remy’s obituaries trending.
He smiles.

TITLE CARD:

“UNFOLLOW THE SHADOWS”

ACT ONE – WOODS, NIGHT

MIKEY VERIFIED and DOLLA’ KWEEN drive to a remote influencer retreat to “disconnect from the drama.”

MIKEY
Why do killers always go for the gay or the hot one first? That’s me, babe. That’s me.

DOLLA’ KWEEN
Shut up. Ain’t nobody killing us. I got sage, sex appeal, and a stun gun. Period.

They pull up to a luxury glamping site. No signal. No WiFi. Only… nature.

ACT TWO – GLAMPING CAMPFIRE – LATER

They sit with two other influencers trying to reboot their fame: YVONNE GLOWUP and TITO TINGZ.

YVONNE
Remy’s gone. Zeekie too. Something’s happening to us.

TITO
Y’all acting like karma got a camera crew.

Suddenly, Tito’s tablet lights up on its own.
A video starts playing… it’s his own fan apology video from 2022, looped and glitching.

VOICE (from the tablet):
You said you’d do better… then you ghosted me.

His tent bursts into flames seconds later.
Everyone screams. Tito vanishes in the smoke.

ACT THREE – OG SUPPORTER HQ – NIGHT

NIA_STILLHERE is watching the retreat’s live feed through hacked cameras.

NIA
Tito’s done. One less “tingz” to worry about.

OG_COMMENTER
Time to trigger the algorithm spike. Send it to the Headmaster.

They forward the footage.

ACT FOUR – HEADMASTER’S DARK OFFICE

The Headmaster reviews Tito’s death footage.

HEADMASTER
His engagement dropped 34%. But this death just gave me 5 new data deals.
(beat)
Let the fans feast.

He taps a button. A hidden system called “REACTOR” glows red.

> “REACTOR: Viral Boost Enabled. Audience Fear: 78% Surge.”

ACT FIVE – MIKEY VERIFIED’S SOLO SCENE

Mikey tries to run through the woods to escape. He hears faint notifications.

DING. DING. DING.

His phone starts blowing up—thousands of old DMs and comments he never replied to now showing up all at once. His phone heats up, catches fire, and…

FLASH!
He’s yanked into a tree hollow. His phone remains behind—still vibrating.

ACT SIX – DOLLA’ KWEEN’S FINAL STAND (FOR NOW)

She finds a dusty phone booth in the woods (WTF?). It rings. She answers.

VOICE (OG_COMMENTER):
You got 10 seconds to comment back to every message you ignored… or say goodbye.

She slams the phone down. Looks around. A figure in a hoodie appears.

DOLLA’ KWEEN
Bitch, I’m from the block AND the ’gram. You better come correct.

Cue a standoff. She fights. She runs. She disappears into the dark… but her LIVE feed still running shows her being dragged by a faceless shadow.

ENDING SCENE – HEADMASTER MONOLOGUE

Back in the velvet chair.

HEADMASTER
They worship likes… but forgot to respect comments.
When they forget who gave them power, I remind them who takes it.

He sips again. A new name appears on the screen: “Dolla’ Kween – Viral Spike Pending.”

NEXT TIME ON ‘COMMENT OR DIE’:

The first supporter death shocks the trio. But the Headmaster has a backup plan.
A dead influencer’s ghost returns through a TikTok filter—and starts helping the killers.

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